Layers of ether
Trance filled sensations
Trance prompt at haiku heights
I can feel myself floating away with this.
"Layers of ether" - nice one!
Love the unexpected "layers of ether" -- gives the poem an otherworldly feel.
Wow...u created another world...and ur pic suited ur wonderful lines!luvd it!great thought :)
transformational.well done.
I also like "layers of ether" -- very nice word imagery!!
excellent piece
Lovely trance-inducing haiku
surreal and seductive.
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I can feel myself floating away with this.
ReplyDelete"Layers of ether" - nice one!
ReplyDeleteLove the unexpected "layers of ether" -- gives the poem an otherworldly feel.
ReplyDeleteWow...u created another world...
ReplyDeleteand ur pic suited ur wonderful lines!
luvd it!great thought :)
transformational.
ReplyDeletewell done.
I also like "layers of ether" -- very nice word imagery!!
ReplyDeleteexcellent piece
ReplyDeleteLovely trance-inducing haiku
ReplyDeletesurreal and seductive.
ReplyDelete