Sunday, October 31, 2010

Obscured Views



Otherworldly creations beauty and wonder
Directing currents of desire
From veils we hide under


Beautiful pleasures of another time
Connecting to old ways
Of the mystics mind


Reaching lost particles and pieces true
Sensations are felt
By a spirited few


Designs of enchantment and lure.
Union of symbol and ruin
Rising from mystery pure.




Prompt "Mystic" for Haiku Heights

9 comments:

  1. *Sensations felt
    By a spirited few*

    Your writings I love more and more... even if I don't get to figure it all out... but that's what poetry is about... so often only the writer knows exactly... and we readeers just feel these goosebumps, too difficult to describe
    .)

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  2. The first stanza looked so much like the picture, I thought the picture was created for it! Amazing.

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  3. I just love that idea of connecting to the old ways. Lovely poem.

    Teresa

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  4. Both the image and words complement each other very well...

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  5. You create such beautiful imagery with your words. Lovely!

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  6. Wonderful image and poem...well done isha

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  7. Awesome poetry and images. Just loved it all.


    Melanie

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  8. beautiful imagery.. a lovely take on Mystic :)

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