Saturday, May 28, 2011

Trance




Hypnotic love surrounding

Layers of ether

Trance filled sensations


Trance prompt at haiku heights


9 comments:

  1. I can feel myself floating away with this.

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  2. "Layers of ether" - nice one!

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  3. Love the unexpected "layers of ether" -- gives the poem an otherworldly feel.

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  4. Wow...u created another world...
    and ur pic suited ur wonderful lines!
    luvd it!great thought :)

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  5. I also like "layers of ether" -- very nice word imagery!!

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  6. excellent piece

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  7. Lovely trance-inducing haiku

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